1Point at one real element. Do not say only that it is bad.
2Say whether it is a merit, a fault, or one of each.
3Tie the judgement to the information given.
Biology exemplar
Original question
A plan tests an enzyme at 20 °C and 22 °C, with three repeats, and concludes there is no optimum. Criticise the plan.
Annotated answer
XThe repeats, and the narrow temperature range. Merit or faultThe repeats are a merit. The range is a fault. YRepeats show scatter at those two temperatures, but 20 °C to 22 °C cannot show whether an optimum exists elsewhere.
The labels match the frame. Read them in order. This is one accurate route, not the only one.
Exam habit
Credit a merit when there is one. Criticism here is not only fault-finding.
Common pitfall
Writing “the experiment should be improved” without inspecting anything.
Exam-style question
5 marks
Based on a sample question
Mark points shown after marking
Students measured the pigment released from beetroot discs at six temperatures, as a measure of membrane permeability. The graph shows each mean with its spread.
Illustrative data.
The students concluded that membrane permeability increases across the whole temperature range. Criticise this conclusion.
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Total for this question: 5 marks
Answer discussion
X is the low-temperature region, and also the later rise. The spreads at 20, 30 and 40 °C overlap, so the evidence Y does not support a steady increase across that part of the range. The means at 60 and 70 °C sit clear of those earlier spreads, so a rise at the higher temperatures is still supported. The graph says nothing about temperatures that were not tested. “It is a bad conclusion” inspects nothing. A spread that does not overlap is not a statistical test.
Where this comes from
Unit 3 sample paper. Question 3 (b)(v) asks you to criticise the conclusion that membrane permeability increases as temperature increases, using the table and the graph. Sample assessment, not a live paper.