COMMAND WORD · BIOLOGY

Criticise

Inspect a plan, a set of data or a statement, say what holds and what does not, and back each judgement.

All command words

Writing frame

X is a merit or a fault because of Y.

What the parts mean

  • Xa real part of the plan, the data or the claim
  • Merit or faultwhich of the two it is
  • Ythe information that backs that judgement

How to build your answer

  1. 1Point at one real element. Do not say only that it is bad.
  2. 2Say whether it is a merit, a fault, or one of each.
  3. 3Tie the judgement to the information given.

Biology exemplar

Original question

A plan tests an enzyme at 20 °C and 22 °C, with three repeats, and concludes there is no optimum. Criticise the plan.

Annotated answer

XThe repeats, and the narrow temperature range. Merit or faultThe repeats are a merit. The range is a fault. YRepeats show scatter at those two temperatures, but 20 °C to 22 °C cannot show whether an optimum exists elsewhere.

The labels match the frame. Read them in order. This is one accurate route, not the only one.

Exam habit

Credit a merit when there is one. Criticism here is not only fault-finding.

Common pitfall

Writing “the experiment should be improved” without inspecting anything.

Exam-style question

5 marks

Based on a sample question

Mark points shown after marking

Students measured the pigment released from beetroot discs at six temperatures, as a measure of membrane permeability. The graph shows each mean with its spread.

Mean pigment released at 20, 30, 40, 50, 60 and 70 °C: 20, 26, 32, 50, 75 and 88 percent, with spreads of plus or minus 7, 7, 8, 6, 4 and 4. The spreads at 20, 30 and 40 °C overlap. The means at 60 and 70 °C are clear of the earlier spreads.1020304050607080020406080100Temperature / °CPigment released / % of maximum
Illustrative data.

The students concluded that membrane permeability increases across the whole temperature range. Criticise this conclusion.

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Total for this question: 5 marks

Answer discussion

X is the low-temperature region, and also the later rise. The spreads at 20, 30 and 40 °C overlap, so the evidence Y does not support a steady increase across that part of the range. The means at 60 and 70 °C sit clear of those earlier spreads, so a rise at the higher temperatures is still supported. The graph says nothing about temperatures that were not tested. “It is a bad conclusion” inspects nothing. A spread that does not overlap is not a statistical test.

Where this comes from

Unit 3 sample paper. Question 3 (b)(v) asks you to criticise the conclusion that membrane permeability increases as temperature increases, using the table and the graph. Sample assessment, not a live paper.

Sample paper WBI13/01, question 3 (b)(v) (5 marks), 2017 sample assessment. Question page · Mark scheme page

Sources

Pearson Biology specification · Sample assessment PDF